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[tone1tees]

hey guys i got my website up jus wanted to get your thoughts on it, hope y'all like it let me know what y'all think.feedback pls.www.four-ts.com www.four-ts.com

[binki]

two the the design links are not there and you need some serious editing on spelling and grammer on the index page.

On the page with the shirt images, selecting the first of the 3 screws up the rest of the page.

Site navigation is difficult.

[MonkeyMeMe]

Great looking site, it grabs your eye well,,,
I also like your products,

I did see some spelling errors on the home page unless they were on purpose.

keep up the good work
MMM
Welcome to the forum as well

[EnMartian]

Proofread!  Immediately.  I couldn't get past the home page.   I saw three or four mistakes in the first sentence alone. 

[MXRacingDad]

Please don't take all of the constructive criticism personally. These folks know how to sell on the internet. First your home page should reflect your products, I felt the globes were a little much and I saw nothing that told me what you do. I didn't even read the text to see the mistakes, I did figure out that the words on the center globe are your menu. 2 of those weren't linked to anything. I am assuming that you just got the site up and working so all of your products are not listed as yet. Remember first impressions are where you get customers and with all the websites available offering the same products nowadays, yours has to jump out front. There are some pretty good web programmers on here that will try to help. Feel free to ask questions, and as I said please don't take the constructive criticism personally. Congrats on getting it on line that is a big step in itself, and welcome to the forum.

[msmith08]

I agree with everything dad said. I wasn't sure what you were selling by the look of the homepage. I think your heading in the right direction though Good Luck with it.
Mike

[EnMartian]

Definitely don't take the criticism personally.  Everyone here has gone through the same thing before, and we're all just trying to help. 

Proofreading happens to be one of my pet peeves,  and I think grammar and spelling can really have an impact on the success or failure of a site.  I'd hate to see yours have issues because of something that is so easily corrected.

[cbsuperduty]

I agree with the others. Nothing personal. It is just stuff that needs to be corrected. First double check the spelling. Secondly ditch the busy background (globes). I like the products but I wouldn't have made it that far if I was a customer (mainly because of the background) as I wouldn't have taken the site seriously. I would also change your link that says shopping cart to Shop or Products or Shirts. I am in IT as my day job so I had a good feeling what would turn up if I clicked there but some customers won't. If you want to clean up your site with out a lot of coding knowledge. I would switch to a word-press site and then get a nice, clean template for looks.

Let me know if you have any questions.

[MonkeyMeMe]

We are here to help,, please just ask us,,

MMM

[heatpressvinyl]

Ok Tone 1,, here is my take on it,, first if I were to do this I would use a black background with one huge globe,, not tiled,, and get rid of the globe on the first page in the center,, some picks of your shirt or a video would be nice there,, I understand the miss spelling and if you are just testing your first go around with a website well then you have the first step tackled...

I would suggest looking at some other sites and get a idea of what you want because most folks would click on the site you have now and click off,, so good going on your first shot   Don't get frustrated and keep going until you get it to look the way you want,, pagebuzz.com are some great people to work with so contact them and they will give you a hand with the CSS and stuff ,,,, 

And if you need some help like Dad said there are some great hacks here that can give you a hand...